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This time, I actually enjoyed it a lot. The story was a lot better than the stories I've read from the previous author, and the way that the author did this was incredible like it was. like it was so mysterious, but also a very interesting story to read. And I found that I was very into the story, the creativity, and how the author did it.
Originality: 15/15
I definitely can see the originality of the story in the way that it is written. It's something that I have not read, but I love the title of the story. I enjoyed the story a lot, especially how the author wrote it and how interesting it was.
Storytelling: 15/15
storytelling made you feel like you were sitting there watching a beautiful story unfold, and I appreciated that a lot
Character: 15/15
He enjoyed the characters because you could definitely tell that there was room for them to progress, and that is something that I enjoy because when it comes to characters if you can't feel like they are going to progress, then the story is not going to progress. And with this story, you could tell the character Was going to progress. That is something that I can appreciate.
Story Flows:10 /15
The story still needs to be a little bit of editing. Or a little bit of editing, but besides. that, there was still a good story.
Cover Design: 15/15
They like to cover. I feel that cover are beautiful. And I feel like it represents the story very well.
Final Thoughts: 10/10
At the end of the day, the story is never going to be a bad story, and there are no bad stories. There are stories that need editing, and their stories need love. The story does need some editing and some love, but besides that, I found the story to be very interesting; even though there were not a lot of chapters, you could still tell that in the story, there were characters, and the story would progress. And that is something that I like to see. If I don't see it, I feel like the story is. In this story's beginning stages, I felt it would blossom very well and that the story would do well with the right audience. I enjoyed the story and appreciate the author giving me the time to review it.
Chapters I read: prologue and 1st chapter
Total points:95
Summary of the book:
"She was raging fire burning his world; He was ice cold freezing her world"Arshika Goenka has everything a person wish for in their life, Power, Beauty,Brain, money and Love in abundance.A powerful advocate with sharp tongue and heart of pure gold who is Angel for needy and desolate people.The only thorn in her imperfectly perfect life was the feeling of missing home that she never had but she embraced it with open heart and made every place she go her temporary home .When a twist of fate brings her a case she is not ready to leave without a fight and that throws her in the whirlpool of a dangerous shark ready to kill her , unexpected friendship, mafia and a hot mysterious stranger.Will she be able to save herself and others from the monsters?Will she be able to win a case?Will she be able to find her permanent home?Follow the journey of Arshika to know the answer and how she navigates through this world.
AUTHORS WARNING
Remember that these are, in fact, my thoughts and only mine alone. You do not have to like them or agree with them in any way. But because they are my thoughts, they are final, which means they cannot be swayed or changed in any way. If you do decide to disagree with my thoughts and attack me directly in the comments or DM, I will block you and add you to a block list. Therefore, never reviewing your work ever again.
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