Cissyscity
I’m re writing chapter 47 of The Deal so that will be the next update, tomorrow. It’ll show up as a new chapter. More than 50% of it will be different so make sure to re read!
After that Bruises or The Deal next?
Cissyscity
Cissyscity
Go to the end of the introduction of Bruises. If you want to see Bella’s AI character!!
savannahhlynn
Oh my gosh I love it!! And I saw the one of rafe and lily and oh my god I am OBSESSED with
Cissyscity
Guys….. I may or may not have learned to use ai and created the characters from my books as there own characters…..
Cissyscity
Honest opinions….would it bother you guys if I edit the last chapter of the deal And take the part of Rafe telling Lily he loves her out??? It’ll still happen in a later chapter but maybe not so soon? Or would it throw u off to continue reading as if he didn’t say it yet????? Let me know
Willow_Echoes
I thought it was good timing on his end considering the dream, however I think that if you felt it was too soon there’s no harm in waiting until a later chapter.
Cissyscity
I think I’m going to unpublished chapter 47 of the deal and change it too…..
Cissyscity
I’m going to be editing chapter seventy four of Bruises and Rafes reaction…….
Cissyscity
Idk guys I don’t really like the way I wrote the last chapter……what do you think??
savannahhlynn
Was so busy but I had to read that chapter!! Still have to read Bruises too! But I I absolutely loved it!! I love that rafe decided to tell her and he didn’t care about waiting. He needed her to know that he loved every part of her!! I love anything you write though so if you feel the need to change it, then by all means do- and I will have the same of reactions to whatever you edit
Cissyscity
I don’t know..I was having a hard time capturing the way I was thinking it. If that makes sense. It just felt kind of unfinished maybe idk lol. Let me know what u think when u get a chance to read! Always look forward to ur comments
savannahhlynn
I haven’t read it yet.. haven’t had time but I of course skimmed it.. but anything you write is magical. Why don’t you like it?
Cissyscity
New chapter of The Deal is out!
Cissyscity
Almost done!!
Cissyscity
New chapter of The Deal will be out tonight!
Don’t worry, when I’m a famous author one day I’ll pay for your therapy………hehe
savannahhlynn
I am gonna hold you to that! You keep me on my toes! Anytime I get comfortable something happens