@MissNight- Hi, So I finally actually watched dragonball super, and I do not think that the concept I was going for was going to work. I am revisiting it though, the moment I get a clear direction, I will republish.
Sorry though.
How about a different Dragonball book in the meanwhile? It takes place in the Dragonball universe pre-Super, it's going to be a Trunks x oc story.
Are you keen?