Nandini1978
I read His Control. You need to edit it. There are some contradictory history about Balia's parents and past. Also who was the main villain of the story Pappeteer or Diablo. Are they two different persons or a same one. Was Rocco or Elio involved with Diablo weren't clear. I think you should take your time to read and clear the confusions through editing. Otherwise it's a nice story.