KhiradAfzal5
When will you update??
that_royal_writer
vinuvinu132
Hello writer....
I never gave opinion on your writing before...
I am a huge fan of not only your writing but also The YOU as a person
You write your story beautifully...,
The clarity/pov of each character is so on point that, as a reader I own/understand your characters like it's my second personality throughout EBL ..
But in EBI, I feel like I don't know the Main Leads that well, may be it is because the story is still young ...
But I cannot help thinking reason behind is
1. The each chapter length of EBI is less in comparison to that of EBL
2. The Multi Pov's in EBI, in EBL we were so content with Adi and Vishu, Nanda and Shruthi (infact I was diying for to know a little more of their pov) but in EBI, there are many like Kheera, Yashu, Deva, Vishnu Sir, Vinod and Shanti....
And the fact that Vinod and Shanti are getting more story lines than Dheera and Yashu....I don't mind though but not at the cost of Dheera and Yashu's Pov's .... specially Dheera's pov ....he has very little lines ...
Please please please give us more about Kheera and Yashu... pretty please
I'm sorry if I hurt You ....
Thank you
Regards
Your Royal Reader
that_royal_writer
@vinuvinu132 Heya thanks for the compliments ❤️ For EBI, even I realized pretty quickly that I took some of the EBL knowledge for granted while introducing characters which is why I now added an authors note and character introduction. As for the length of the chapters, it's kind of my thing to write short chapters at first and then slowly increase the length as the story gets more gripping. Even the initial chapters of EBL were short. But regarding the multiple POV's I agree, should've taken the time to introduce the character properly before adding their POV, like how I did in EBL. Won't be adding any new characters or POV's until the readers get familiarised with the existing ones and yes Dheera will have more lines moving forward :)
that_royal_writer
Spoilers for EBL ahead
During the initial days of marriage, when Vaishu used to rely on Pallu for her dressing choices, Adi got angry and later told her that he sees her as a leader and so she shouldn't rely on anyone and should make her own decisions big or small and when she asked "what if I make a wrong decision?" He replied "Then we will deal with the consequences. Together."
Later during the battle when Nanda tells him "I can't believe what Vaishu did?", Adi's initial assumption was that she did some huge mistake and his first response is "whatever it is, I'll fix it"
Also after their fight regarding Meihu, Vaishu wears a purple lehenga to court and when Adi asks why she did it, she says that if not her she hopes that her lehenga would calm him down and that she cannot let people think of him as a devil again.
Later that same purple lehenga helps calm him down during battle ❤️
dee_solanki
@that_royal_writer you know what author..., I have a habit of taking screenshot of the inspiring, motivational, and deep mindset things..., but while reading your book.., my entire gallery looks like a screenshot album
Himangi1826
@that_royal_writer Yep I understood it and such small details make it even more Enchanting
Me_nhi_to_koun
Heyyyy Sana diii
Well I was wondering you didn't tell who is white knight of Shruti. Did you ? Chalo Chalo ab batao jaldiiii !!!!!
Crystal646933
@Me_nhi_to_koun rightly said.. Di please try to add it!! Anyways lots of love to you and rake care of your health; don't overwork
that_royal_writer
Language of North has been finalized!!!
The voting is closed for the language of the North and here are the final results
Bengali - 52
Gujarathi - 47
Odia - 21
Marathi -109
So now it's finalized Marathi is the language of the North ❤️
Vinod shall use some Marathi words :)
Also please go and vote on the authors note of EBI. It doesn't even have 300 votes and that's making me sad.
srishti0705
Dear author, u have excellent writing skills. Keep writing ✍️.
Pyscho7Thinker
Bro u really write good stories
Enjoyed reading thru them
rocky_bts
Congratulations EBI TOP 2
that_royal_writer
41 votes and 22 comments more
that_royal_writer
Next update of EBI will have memes!!!
